Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is week as i was able to write more.

I need to get better at writing more with more interesting words in it

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

 I want to be a meerkat that  is a nurse and can help little
meerkats. When I go back home I saw a bright yellow van.
I jumped  in it and there was a giraffe, a zebra, an orangutan
so I helped them because they were sick too.I live in a tree.
I live on my own  and I like to eat burgers.