The hot air balloon race

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we
had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is It made a picture in my head.

I need to improve on putting full stops and capital letters in my writing. We also made a google draw
showing the things that we would take with us in on the balloon.

The Hot Air Balloon

The giant colourful hot air balloon floated like butterflies.
The hot air balloon flew over the big, green, tall pine trees and
all over the world. There were lots of sheep and cows and
horses. There was three players. There is Savannah and Cruz
and I. The first to go to Australia and then India will win a hot
air balloon medal for winning. Savannah won so she was in the
finals and the next race I will be racing Cruz and I'm sure that I
will win next time. I like hot air balloons, they are incredible.
I am proud  of Savannah, she is so lucky.